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« Reply #70 on: June 08, 2009, 06:18:56 PM » |
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Obseesed is dong great which are great news. Now, If someone would like to take/steal my ideas and develop them is okay (I seriously doubt my story would be ready this decade).
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« Reply #72 on: September 07, 2009, 01:46:47 PM » |
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Great stuff.  Me likey.  Do you plan on any more?  |
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« Reply #73 on: September 07, 2009, 02:11:14 PM » |
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Great stuff. Me likey. Do you plan on any more? Yes I have 3 more in the works, one that's very much like this one (i.e. very realistic) and two more that are more over the top fantasy but that still use implants. Hopefully the next one will be done in a couple of months. |
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« Reply #74 on: September 07, 2009, 02:51:07 PM » |
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Yes I have 3 more in the works, one that's very much like this one (i.e. very realistic) and two more that are more over the top fantasy but that still use implants. Hopefully the next one will be done in a couple of months.
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« Reply #75 on: September 07, 2009, 09:10:44 PM » |
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Yup, Obsessed, even tho not all like implants, i stuill think you're doing a great service to the community.
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« Reply #76 on: September 07, 2009, 09:43:36 PM » |
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Yup, Obsessed, even tho not all like implants, i stuill think you're doing a great service to the community.
Thanks! It's the one genre of BE that is really hard to find in BE fiction. To be honest I don't understand why given the number of guys on this board and other boards who seem to only like (or at least prefer) implants. I'll do my best to give you all stories that will hopefully keep you wanting more (and more and more). |
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« Reply #77 on: September 07, 2009, 11:23:27 PM » |
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Thanks! It's the one genre of BE that is really hard to find in BE fiction. To be honest I don't understand why given the number of guys on this board and other boards who seem to only like (or at least prefer) implants. I'll do my best to give you all stories that will hopefully keep you wanting more (and more and more).
Well, I for one enjoy Implant stories and liked yours a great deal. You mentioned you may go on the over the top size. I must certaintely hope so. Mastasia size should be the small size.  |
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« Reply #78 on: September 08, 2009, 11:30:12 AM » |
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Oh he already did make Mastasia girls look small, thrice indeed, but i guess i already revealed too much information.  |
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« Reply #79 on: September 08, 2009, 09:57:19 PM » |
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Oh he already did make Mastasia girls look small, thrice indeed, but i guess i already revealed too much information. Shhhh...don't reveal too much from my up coming stories. |
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« Reply #80 on: September 09, 2009, 03:51:52 AM » |
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Shhhh...don't reveal too much from my up coming stories. *looks forward even more* |
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« Reply #81 on: September 09, 2009, 11:13:54 AM » |
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I love you writing style! Very good be via implants story |
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« Reply #82 on: September 09, 2009, 04:38:43 PM » |
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You already got a fanbase man. It was expected, huh? |
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« Reply #83 on: September 21, 2009, 07:25:58 PM » |
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« Reply #84 on: October 23, 2009, 06:53:07 PM » |
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first one was amazing!
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« Reply #85 on: October 24, 2009, 06:42:06 AM » |
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*is looking forward too*
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« Reply #86 on: October 24, 2009, 10:57:58 AM » |
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*is looking forward too*
Next one is about 80% done. Hopefully it will be done by Christmas. |
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« Reply #87 on: October 24, 2009, 07:55:34 PM » |
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Nice, Obsessed, keep it up. Your fans are eager to read you.
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« Reply #88 on: October 24, 2009, 09:32:49 PM » |
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Next one is about 80% done. Hopefully it will be done by Christmas. Awesome.  |
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« Reply #89 on: October 25, 2009, 06:26:46 AM » |
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P.S. Is the next one one of the fantasy sized ones or the other realistic one?
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« Reply #90 on: October 25, 2009, 05:07:59 PM » |
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P.S. Is the next one one of the fantasy sized ones or the other realistic one?
It's in keeping with the standards I used in my first story. The next one after this however will be completely over-the-top! That one also about 80% done. |
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« Reply #91 on: October 26, 2009, 12:03:04 PM » |
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« Reply #92 on: October 27, 2009, 02:31:08 PM » |
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i just can't wait !! i have a gift for you if you speed up |
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« Reply #93 on: October 27, 2009, 06:40:24 PM » |
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i have a gift for you if you speed up A gift for me? Well if it's anything implant related you've just lit a fire under me to get this done! |
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« Reply #94 on: October 27, 2009, 11:53:03 PM » |
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« Reply #95 on: October 28, 2009, 06:23:52 PM » |
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Hehe it pays to be an author |
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« Reply #96 on: October 29, 2009, 05:04:12 PM » |
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</font><blockquote><font class="small">Quote:</font><hr /> <b><i>jimmyg said:</i></b> OBSESSION is the single greatest and most thorough work of erotic literature featuring breast implants, known to mankind. You sir, are immortalized in history. <hr /></blockquote><font class="post"> <b>Second that.</b> <img src="/images//graemlins/grin.gif" alt="" /> "<b>Obsession</b>" is "<b>THE BE via Breast Implants Story</b>". <img src="/images//graemlins/grin.gif" alt="" /> see yaa... =) I became a member of keisha's site just for this story and i'm loving it! cant wait for episode 28 |
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« Reply #97 on: November 14, 2009, 09:58:42 AM » |
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My new story StackeDD is up at www.overflowingbra.comIts about a strip club where the dancers all get implants! Hope you all enjoy!! Adam |
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« Reply #98 on: November 14, 2009, 10:33:57 AM » |
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My new story StackeDD is up at www.overflowingbra.comIts about a strip club where the dancers all get implants! Hope you all enjoy!! Adam *downloads* |
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« Reply #99 on: November 14, 2009, 08:30:27 PM » |
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I am enjoying it already man. again: you're a genius! |
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« Reply #100 on: November 14, 2009, 09:29:29 PM » |
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My new story StackeDD is up at www.overflowingbra.comIts about a strip club where the dancers all get implants! Hope you all enjoy!! Adam I gave it a read. I like the idea, but I think the writing style and dialogue and plot concepts are way too similar to Gold Digger. Rich guy has two girls fighting over him and the size of their implants, with a scene where he fills the implants. Also, the girls are WAY too willing to bend to the will of the rich guy to get boob jobs... real life doesn't work that way. It kinds sounds like you're trying to basis BE-via-implant stories in real life... but all the female protagonists feel like bimbos. |
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« Reply #101 on: November 15, 2009, 06:38:02 AM » |
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Great stuff. I really enjoyed it, especially certain scenes with Vanilla. I look forward to your next great story. |
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« Reply #102 on: November 15, 2009, 01:14:06 PM » |
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I gave it a read. I like the idea, but I think the writing style and dialogue and plot concepts are way too similar to Gold Digger. Rich guy has two girls fighting over him and the size of their implants, with a scene where he fills the implants.
Also, the girls are WAY too willing to bend to the will of the rich guy to get boob jobs... real life doesn't work that way. It kinds sounds like you're trying to basis BE-via-implant stories in real life... but all the female protagonists feel like bimbos.
I appreciate the critique and I will agree that the stories are similar. I think you'll find my next implant story to be quite different, there is no competition in the traditional sense. As for the 'real life" approach I also agree with you in part...yes real life would not be exactly as I portrayed, however I approach my stories much the same way movies and TV approach stories, just "real enough" to get the point across and have a lot of fun telling a story. And yes the female characters are "bimbo like" but again I wasn't trying to portray them as intelligent, in particular I was trying to portray Vanilla as shallow. For me (and this is my taste which I know is not everyone's) I like flawed characters who are far from perfect and even a little unlikeable (like the characters in Gold Digger). Cheers and thanks for the input! Hopefully you'll enjoy the next 2 coming soon more than this one. |
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« Reply #103 on: November 16, 2009, 05:40:02 PM » |
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well i think i like this stories, even if they have many elements in common. Also IMO Vanillaisn't a bimbo: she was smart enough to manipulate Adam. In fact i consider her coldness made me think she could be very dangerous irl.
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« Reply #104 on: November 16, 2009, 09:18:43 PM » |
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I really liked it, and I´m anxious to read the next one.
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