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The only two "stories" that are on topic are a post about concepts and gripes with Breast Expansion and Butt expansion, and a story about two busty lesbians in high school.
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Ok, today's comic ideas are general outlines and minor gripes.
We'll be exploring the realm of BE fiction, in the case the "BE" can stand from breast expansion or butt expansion, the latter being a genre I think is woefully underrepresented on the internet.
Mini idea #1 FPBE
Mainly because authors/artists may view this as odd and maybe are too reluctant to try something out that would make the reader of the comic feel it was happening to "them," and backing off, people tend to avoid making a FIRST PERSON breast expansion comic.
Simply put, it adds new life into a genre already well-known in porn comic circles. People seem too obsessed with the why, and how, and trying to make all sorts of literary flourish, then limiting the growth to maybe three panels or shots of progressing without focusing on, well, the GROWTH!
The reluctance that I've mentioned earlier may be because the artists are making comics for male readers who may be skeeved at "their" breasts growing bigger in the first person perspective, but I believe there are enough men who are already smart enough to realize it's NOT THEM. We also forget that women have this fetish too, though they aren't as vocal, nor do they want to try breast implants, out of personal fear. With this new perspective in storytelling, they can feel free to lose themselves in the fetish.
Now if men DO complain, here's a wrinkle we can add: first person boyfriend viewing girlfriend grow. A breast expansion scene from the man's perspective, and where his eyes start darting around, much like first person cameraman porn.
Mini Idea #2 Sleeping BE, fly on the wall perspective.
This second idea comes from the overuse of frantic, panic induced BE in breast expansion comics. Likely a side effect of the "hard and fast" approach to pornography people have grown used to. What if the growth happens at night, and doesn't wake up the heroine? What if slowly she grows out of her nightgown, pushing every button, and slowly rising outward?
Tossing and turning in her sleep, her breast get smooshed, and spread in ways affected by weight and compression, while she moves more in her sleep, blissfully unaware, moaning and talking in her sleep about marshmallows, pillows and other soft things?
Then let's imagine another scene, a woman is exhausted after a business trip. She falls asleep in a chair. After watching her swell up right out of her blouse, the "camera" moves behind her and slightly above, watching her breasts balloon outward, at the same time, another perspective can be shown from across the room, showing the breasts growing toward the reader, occasional zooming in on lamps being knocked over, tables moving, and everything being crushed and moved by her giant breasts.
Now let's just say she's in a mountain cabin, and she wakes up as her breasts have filled up the room, it's then that you can add the explosive conclusion of her breasts destroying the cabin, and the roof resting on her gargantuan breasts.
Mini idea #3: Why's it always gotta be skinny chicks?
Why are all the women who get BE, have to be skinny, or normal sized for that matter? Why not have a main character who has a huge butt, but wants to be more balanced, or a BBW who got fat everywhere but her boobs. Even giantess comics could make a 2-part story: in part one the woman grows to 50 feet tall or more, but is still flat as a board. In part two she gets the breast expansion and appreciates more than anyone!
Muscle comic writers could "show-off" the benefits of their characters by have a breast expansion curse affect women equally, but only their muscular women will have the strength to be able to walk under their own power
Mini idea #4 Butt expansion.
This idea takes bits and pieces from others in here. For the hell of it, I decided to make the character a succubus.
The comic start out with her fighting a vampire, who knocks her out. In the next scene we see her passed out on the floor of a house, a normal everyday suburban house. We watch as her butt, hips, and thighs starts rising outward, ripping her clothes to shreds. Then as she's sleeping her booty is cartoonishly disproportionate to the rest of her.
She wakes up, and struggles to get to her feet, as she becomes more conscious of her surroundings, she's weirded out by the suburban setting, and the notices her posterior and how it dwarfs her torso. In a panic, she starts waddling everywhere, then learns to her horror:
A: She's still growing
B: She can't fit through the door
As she's looking for another way out, she starts slowing down. The weight is getting too much for her, and she falls over, land on her stomach. She struggles in vain, but she can't get up again.
From her, her growth picks up the pace, as her torso is moved forward by her ever expanding rump. She makes it out the door all right, but only up to her waist, her backside is filling the rest of the house, bloating through drywall and banisters, pushing upward to the second floor, causing pressure to build up, and her to get slightly excited. She gets aroused and starts humping the floor. This accelerates the growth until there is no room to go, and her ass pulverizes the house.
The comic ends with the vampire getting a boulder sized sack of gold, and a giant walks up behind the succubus. She's JUST the right size.
Addendum: Butt expansion gripe.
This is a general thing that ticks me off about most butt expansion drawings out there. Now, look, I understand that I'm from mixed origins genetically. One side is all about the boobs, and the other side is all about the butt, so put those cultures together, and you understand my love of Ass n' Titties. (and why I bob my head to that song)
I just am so tired by the dearth of good butt expansion comics, and the lack of women with big booties in "acceptable" men's magazines. (read: white) I'm used to all the stares my white-looking ass gets when I buy an issue of smooth, king, or other publications, but where the hell am I supposed to get a magazine with thick women in it? MAXIM SHRUNK BEYONCE'S BOOTY!!! I understand that these frat-boys who think they're hip only like rail thin women with implanted C-cups, but the rest of us want a woman who can wiggle it (just a little bit.)
Yes, I love boobs, but I love, hips, and thighs, and butts, and anywhere I can slide my finger down and...*ahem* anyway, why is there such little sources for butt expansion?
Maybe it's because too many artists don't study or love booty. That's right. They seem to either put boobs on an ass and think we won't notice, or make only the buttcheecks longer until they look like that buttflap kid on the oblongs!
The rest of the artists, just draw them big, and try to be realistic, or don't see a market for butt expansion. Hell, I've seen only two rap videos with butt expansion, but that means the audience MUST be there. So damnit, internet if you like big butts getting bigger, then make some damn butt expansion comics poste-haste. It'll be 5 years before I can even draw a sick figure without fucking up.
MAKE 2010 the year of the posterior. (Say it out loud, it's catchy goddamnit)
BOOYAKA!!!
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Here's the rough concepts and a scene I'll be working into chapter 1 of the Busty Lesbian Comic
This next idea would be for an ecchi manga. Which would mean, less sex, and more sex comedy.
Idea #1: A secret high school romance between 2 VERY busty lesbians.
The basic plotline is this:
Haruka is the most popular girl at school. She's only a B student, and has mild discipline issues from being tardy, but has an energetic personality and helps out in many clubs. She was a star athlete in middle school, but dropped out of sports in her second year because of two big reasons: Her massive J-cup boobs!
Though that hasn't stopped her from joining some athletic clubs as a trainer, or substitute in sports that don't need you to sprint after something. She even has her own fan club! Her personal motto is "try hard and fight with your own power." She can't stand when people don't try to confront their problems, but helps when people are unable, though those times are far and few between because everyone is drawn in by her spirit.
She's also grown a little vain, and loves the attention her breasts get her, well, except from Kenta, who's obsessed with her. Kenta would be a normal boy, except he's a breast maniac. He gets too worked up sometimes, and she tries to hit him, but he's just WAY to quick. Luckily, there's an SDF wing to her fan club, and the specialize in sneak attacks.
Haruka has one more fan in Motoko, a shy quiet bookworm who's also the class president. She's almost as busty as Haruka (an H-cup), and follows Haruka a lot. Haruka only notices Motoko when she goes on this daily ritual of holding a love letter and never delivering it, which annoys Haruka.
Finally Haruka confronts Motoko. The scene unfolds something like this.
Haruka sneaks up on an unsuspecting Motoko, and snaps her bra.
"Eeeeeep!" Motoko shrieked
"Iincho, you need to grow a backbone, and with boobs like ours, they have to be strong!" -Haruka proudly stated.
"Um...yes, I should endev--"
"No shoulds," Haruka snipped "You WILL deliver that love letter, or you'll never know what could have been. Who the lucky guy? Miyamoto? Ono? That guy with the eyepatch? What's up with that kid, anyway?"
"No, no, I can't tell YOU, it'd be too embarrassing." Motoko said, slinking backward.
"Can't tell me? I'm a regular cupid, a goddess of love!" Haruka proudly states.
"uuuum...cupid's a boy...Haruka-san"-Motoko offered
*blushing* "Ok, so I suck at greek mythology, but it isn't a class here, so I get an excuse," -Haruka deflected', "but HEY I can still help."
Haruka snatches the letter away from Motoko and peeks inside. She drops the envelope and falls silent.
"You like...me. I don't..."
Before Haruka can finish, Motoko passionately, yet anxiously kisses Haruka.
*Crying* You don't have to say it, Haruka-San, but I had to make my feelings known, I'll leave now..."
"I didn't say anything yet, Motoko-chan, you need to let me finish. I need to ask you something. Do you like girls Motoko-chan, or do you just like my breasts?" Haruka asked
"I...have breasts of my own you know," Motoko started, while holding up her chest "and I've liked girls all my life, but I really like you Haruka-san."
"Motoko," Haruka said with a lump in her throat. "It's just too sudden, I want to get to know you better, before I jump to anything. I've been hurt before, so for now can you accept me as a friend who also likes girls?"
"H--hai!" Motoko said, saluting pushing her chest out with sudden pride.
"Hahaha," Haruka giggled, "You're silly, but be honest with me, you like big boobs like I do? Just because we have them doesn't mean we are immune to their charms."
"H-hai!"
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"
"What the hell was th....K-Kenta?"
"Say it isn't so Haruka-chan! Kenta bellowed with neuron-snapping shock "It isn't true, you're just being nice, or you have a fear of men, or your dad left you. Or it's her? Yes, her beguiling shy facade is hiding a Lesbian dominatrix who preys on weaker women, I'll save you from her!"
Her trips as he tries to confront Motoko, but trips and accidentally pulls open her blouse revealing:
"C-chest bindings?" Haruka stammered
At that moment, flushed with embrassment and arousal, the bindings give way, and the readers see Motoko level 2. After the wrappings hit Haruka's face she becomes entranced, then self conscious. She starts crying.
The last panel is a chibified scene with Motoko covering her own breasts, Haruka crying, and kenta nowhere to be seen. Captions read
"Motoko Honda...Lcup > Haruka Sato... J cup" Kenta Wantanabe...Fetal Position"
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....and scene.
The plot would focus around Kenta keeping their Lesbianism and eventual relationship a secret their senior year of High School. Along the way we learn about why Kenta's obsessed with breasts, while he learns to accept what it means to be lesbian. (Don't worry, if this ever gets off the ground, he's getting a girlfriend. Also, the idea wouldn't stop in high school, I'd like to take it into college, marriage, and ending with everyone starting families (yes, I'll be adding characters if this goes anywhere."
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That's it so far, the other concepts are not really BE related, well I do have stuff like: Giantess, weight gain-BBW, amazon-female muscle growth, giantess- growth, futanari, and mythical beings, so check it out if you're bored.
