An Ounce of Prevention ~ story by Kowalski

[Kowalski]

Good evening ladies and germs.

I have uploaded a new story to TOB archive. As always I really value your constructive criticism, praise, moans, groans, et cetera. It's shorter and more hard-boiled than my usual. Pretty much all character + BE without much in the way of "story."
 

[Kowalski]

Oh, here's a link:

http://overflowingbra.com/storyratings.htm?rateID=2311

[robclassact]

I'll be sure to check it out. I'm still a big fan of "You Should Have Seen the One That Got Away."

[YS]

I like it. Well written, for this sort of fiction, with believeable characters, plausible medibabble and some internal consistency... Didn't like the not-so-bright protagonist*, or the hypnosis bit, as I'm not partial to the bimbo stuff.

*it's incredibly depressing for me, to realize that most people are more stupid than I am. And my intellect is severly limited. At least it doesn't keep me up at night.

[Kowalski]

An 'Ounce of Prevention' is now a three-part saga.
As always, your feedback is greatly appreciated.

-K

Pt. 2 'A Pound of Cure'
http://www.overflowingbra.com/storyratings.htm?rateID=2321

Pt. 3 'A Ton of Fun'
http://www.overflowingbra.com/storyratings.htm?rateID=2356

[pakled]

Got all three. Thanks...one of these days I gotta do another one...keep the last ten filled for us...