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Quick question. I posted a story called "The Touch" over at the Overflowing Bra a couple weeks ago and am not sure if I should just leave the story alone or continue with it. One of the comments stated that it seems good by itself. But I did originally have plans to develop it further, with a villain and a rescue and some other fun things. What do you think? Here's a link to my author page: http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=706 |
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« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2011, 10:20:20 AM » |
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Quick question. I posted a story called "The Touch" over at the Overflowing Bra a couple weeks ago and am not sure if I should just leave the story alone or continue with it. One of the comments stated that it seems good by itself. But I did originally have plans to develop it further, with a villain and a rescue and some other fun things. What do you think? Here's a link to my author page: http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=706I enjoyed it. Please continue. You can PM me if you want ideas. |
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« Reply #2 on: May 04, 2011, 04:10:07 AM » |
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Quick question. I posted a story called "The Touch" over at the Overflowing Bra a couple weeks ago and am not sure if I should just leave the story alone or continue with it. One of the comments stated that it seems good by itself. But I did originally have plans to develop it further, with a villain and a rescue and some other fun things. What do you think? Here's a link to my author page: http://www.overflowingbra.com/results.htm?varname=706Please do. Thank you. |
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« Reply #3 on: May 05, 2011, 12:06:50 AM » |
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You're already a 'veteran' author, definitively i can't offer any advice to you besides: 'Please, write more'  |
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Welcome to the internet, where men are men, women are men, and childr3n are the FBI
If it hurts, it means that you're still living
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« Reply #4 on: May 05, 2011, 12:57:19 PM » |
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Thanks Djoser! I appreciate the Kudos, although I don't think I've earned the moniker 'veteran' quite yet. I've only been doing this for 2 months and written only 3 things. I still have a lot of growing to do (although in this forum, so do all of the characters  ) From most of the comments, I think the best bet is for me to just follow my gut. There's more to the story, so I think I will proceed with it. I'm finishing up another story right now, it should be out soon.. It's in the realm of magic and fantasy. I've been deliberately exploring each universe to see how they feel. My next story will either be in an alternate tech-driven universe, where the main character gets to genetically design his own custom concubine - or - I have an idea about writing a story in our very own universe with a main character who expands herself using actual implants. Thanks! - BB47 |
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« Reply #5 on: May 05, 2011, 02:38:31 PM » |
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"From most of the comments, I think the best bet is for me to just follow my gut." I think that (unless you're being paid to write something specific) that's always the best policy. If you enjoy writing something, then there's a good chance that readers will enjoy it too. If you're only writing because you feel obligated to, and it starts to seem like a chore, then it's unlikely that you'll produce anything with that creative spark that makes a story fun to read. So have fun.  |
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« Reply #7 on: June 10, 2011, 05:01:14 PM » |
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Thank you for the heads up!
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MisterL
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« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2011, 04:05:29 AM » |
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A great story, please continue!!
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Belle
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« Reply #9 on: June 13, 2011, 12:42:08 PM » |
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A great story, please continue!!
Thanks MisterL! |
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Belle
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« Reply #10 on: December 17, 2011, 11:50:57 AM » |
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If any of you are interested in a Christmas BE story, follow my author link at the top of this thread to read my newest story called "a Christmas wish"
Let me know what you think!
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MisterL
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« Reply #11 on: December 18, 2011, 05:09:56 AM » |
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Christmas wish is an good story, i like it, but i like it, if they grow slow over the days and maybe even bigger...  |
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Belle
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« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2011, 02:23:10 PM » |
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Thanks, MisterL,
I sort of designed the magic so that the wish would be placed prior to Christmas and then get granted on Christmas day.. to keep in-line with the normal tradition.
So, I guess if Mindy wants even bigger boobs.. or ones that slowly grow.. she'll have to wait a year to get her newer wish...
In the meantime, I'm sure she and Marvin will have a fun filled year to experiment with her current size.. and his endowments as well.
-BB47
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Belle
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« Reply #13 on: December 24, 2011, 10:53:14 AM » |
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For those of you who like to read BE stories that are set in the present, today's the day. Head over to The Overflowing Bra to check out "A Christmas Wish". - thanks |
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