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MisterL
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« on: November 02, 2011, 11:18:45 AM »

I hope I find here somebody who would like to write the story, because I am really bad in write. Sad

The history refers to pictures from gammarai i´ve seen some years ago.

In this story it is about a young woman who becomes delinquent and is condemned to a prison sentence but in this world the punishment is an BE or extreme PE with very big balls (for the men of cause). the longer they are there, the bigger they become so the prison has diferent blocks for small to big girls (can move without equipment and through normal doors), big to huge girls (can bearly move without or have to move with light equipment for example a cart) and huge to WOW girls (who can´t move themselves anymore)...
So our girl had made her first criminal offence and was send into prison. the judge condemns her for 6 months and her tits will be become as big as her head.
I think it should be so, that she tells the story about her new life with the other prisoners who will be mostly way bigger than her and her slowly growing tits. How she outgrows her shirts and find new friends and enemys and live with her new endowments. She is an very beautiful girl, so she have to make sexy pictures. The prison sells the pitures to make money. 
Maybe she falls in love with her cellcompetitor (she has lifelong), whose tits are so big she gives milk and slowly becomes trouble with the doors of the cell, so in a little wile she has to go to another block for the bigger girls. Milk is another way for the prison to earn money but only prisoners who stays over 12 months start to give milk as an side effect from the enlargement.
After 6 months she comes out of prison with her new big tits and want to start a new life, but a corrupt policeman suspends to her a crime because she don´t want to have sex with him. The judge sent her now for five years into prison. The policeman say, he would make it so that she would never come out of prison again. Her life is finaly ruinated, after five years her tits will be so big an normal live was out of question. Back into prison the director (an old classmate with an crush on her) she comes into her old cell and she meets her love again. Their tits grow and our girl began to like her new life/tits and from her lover. After a few months her lover have to go in the second block cause her tits becomes so big she was bearly able to squeeze her tits one after the other through the doors. Our girl was very sad but the director makes it so that she have to work into the 2nd block. So she could meet her love again.
But thats not what she want. Her life was ruinated by the policeman and the only reason to life it now was her love, so she search for the reason why their tits grow. She want to make her tits grow faster for a while so she have to move into the 2nd block. After a short while she found the reason. Its a special medicine that they put into the watersystem of the prison. She steals some off it and drinks it. Her tits grow very fast (without forgetting reallity) and soon she and her lover have a cell together again. The problem was, our girl tits grow almost faster than usuall and after a few months she have to move into block 3 where she grows to her maximum. She grows the biggest tits in history of the prison so she can´t get out of it anymore but she love it. Her love lays next to her, it was an very erotic feelend beeing milked and she like it when the new prisoners have to wash her gigantic bust and worshiped her...


Sorry for my english, thats the reason why i don´t write it by myself...
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solvegas
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« Reply #1 on: November 02, 2011, 12:33:32 PM »

Pretty good idea. I hope someone picks up the idea and runs with it. It would be great if Bust Artists would illustrate it.  Smiley
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Djoser
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« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2011, 07:28:22 PM »

I love when she finally accepts it and seeks voluntarilly to get bigger Tongue
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MisterL
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« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2011, 04:29:58 AM »

Is nobody out there who could write this story?  Cry
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Djoser
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« Reply #4 on: November 28, 2011, 11:10:18 PM »

MisterL: let's face it, there's a shortage of authors. I have had problems finding them for years,with the exception of one, who is pretty amazing but i think he's pretty busy. That's why i had had to write a couple of mediocre stories.
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« Reply #5 on: January 24, 2012, 10:46:41 PM »

I might consider it one day.  I have a nasty backlog that I'm slogging through of my own with very little time to write.  If you're patient, I or someone else may get to it.  There's some technical difficulties with the strory that need to be fixed, and it desperately needs a subplot.  I think it would be nice to reset it on a prison planet or moon with lower gravity to allow for the larger sizes.  And it would be fun to add a twist to the story.. Any ideas?
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Bad Kitty
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« Reply #6 on: January 26, 2012, 05:11:31 PM »

it's a pretty cool story idea I think.

i'd like to learn to be a decent author, but it's a little intimidating. writing is a second language to me.
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« Reply #7 on: January 29, 2012, 09:49:59 PM »

Normally I wouldn't mind doing a story like this I like impossible sizes and submission and stuff thing is I got a lot on my plate already so I can't... not now at least... This is a good idea though...
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