Help Writing

[sonofson]

Hi, I have been writing the The Leprechauns Returns series and I like what I'm writing but I feel how I'm i need another pair of eyes would help.  So If anyone is interested in of being my editor let me know. 

[Belle]

Welcome, first time poster!  Paste a snippet of the story and we'll see.

[Adama]

I think he's talking about the Addventure thread that starts here: The Leprechaun's Return.

[sonofson]

I want to know is that if I could send someone my story  before a publish it checking for grammar and just making sure what I am writing is clear and concise. 

[Adama]

Are you talking about an actual full-length story, or just Addventure episodes?  You're more likely to find takers for the former than the latter.

[sonofson]

they episode that are about two pages long written for Adventure.

[BillPratt]

they episode that are about two pages long written for Adventure.

Ha! Dude is as bad as me. Don't burn out. My e-mail's in my profile if you're still looking for proofs. Don't bother with the PM function. I only drop by here every few weeks, so e-mail is much, much faster.

A word of advice, though. When you have a long episode, chop it up into a few episodes complete with a extension links. One link you immediately use for the next part of the super episode and two or three you leave for those that follow.

[sonofson]

So I finally finished the chapter of this e story.  I don't know.   It always sounds better in my head.

[BillPratt]

So I finally finished the chapter of this e story.  I don't know.   It always sounds better in my head.

They usually do. Quite often it's a sign of too many things in your head that didn't make it to the page. You can alleviate some of this by taking another pass at it and  filling in and detailing the parts that don't hit your buttons hard enough.  Then let it sit a week or two and then go back over it.

Proofing offer still stands.

[sonofson]

Thank's Bill for your help.  I did try to write to you but your email is hidden to me.  But if you want to write to me first at sonofson@gmail.com. I have an idea of the direction I want to take the next chapter.