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Discussions => Feedback for Artists/Writers/Creators => Topic started by: Spacehillbilly on November 14, 2016, 05:59:10 PM

Title: Story and setting idea
Post by: Spacehillbilly on November 14, 2016, 05:59:10 PM

Hello, I am new to this forum, and have written some BE stuff on DA.

I am writing a story about a new beauty product that gives women the bust size of famous internet glamour models.

What model should I feature in my story?

Title: Re: Story and setting idea
Post by: rtpoe on November 14, 2016, 09:07:58 PM

How about the one in your avatar?

Title: Re: Story and setting idea
Post by: Spacehillbilly on November 14, 2016, 10:14:25 PM

I could do that.

Here's the story idea. It's summertime. The beaches are filled with 20 something year old college kids. Meanwhile, women all around the world are flocking to buy a revolutionary beauty product called "Milani's Essence", a serum with th DNA of Denise Milani that gives any girl who drinks it gains Milani"s bust size ( Which is a 28F).

Our Female protagonist is a young 20 somethings year old girl who is average yet pretty. She is invited to a beach party, but is very self conscious about her petite bust. So she buys Milani's essence and now has the smoking hot bod of Denise Milani.