Breast Expansion Archive Forum
Discussions => Feedback for Artists/Writers/Creators => Topic started by: Feral on August 23, 2017, 11:40:47 AM
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So...a buddy of mine is trying to break into the BE story biz. Here is a link.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B0752C4174/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1503506219&sr=8-1&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=51GgX-dxuKL&ref=plSrch
Looking foward to some feedback to uh...pass along to him.
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Oh yeah, in case you are unfamiliar with amazon, they let you have a sample before buying.
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Nicely written, interesting setting and pleasant characters, from what I could gather from the example.
Best wishes for your... buddy's... success!
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JJ says thanks.
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I just purchased after reading the preview. I'm always on the lookout for quality BE fiction.
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Hey my first...uh JJ's first sale. Thanks man. I look forward to hearing what you think after you are done. Vol 2 is on the way.
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Volume 2 is up.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B075FYDYJW/ref=mp_s_a_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1504870414&sr=8-2&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=417pOPpzw9L&ref=plSrch
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Volume 3, as some of you already know... is online. Thanks for the purchases. I fixed some errors and uploaded them so it should update soon.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B075PTJLJR/ref=mp_s_a_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1505670902&sr=8-3&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=41b-aQzHcpL&ref=plSrch
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Volume 4 is up. Thank you for reading.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B0764MWH8Y/ref=mp_s_a_1_4?ie=UTF8&qid=1507085662&sr=8-4&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=51fIH8g-T3L&ref=plSrch
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For those of you that have been reading, would you like to see the current stories continue in this chapter format with an occasional one shot story dropped in or would you like to see more new stories with different characters and settings altogether? Or some combination?
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I'm very much enjoying the stories but I am mostly into BE and not into MG, WG, etc. I do appreciate a little but of butt expansion. With that said, I think I would prefer more long-form, self contianed stories rather than multiple vignettes. I just hate waiting for the next part :). I plan to continue to purchase regardless as the quality is really quite good.
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I'm very much enjoying the stories but I am mostly into BE and not into MG, WG, etc. I do appreciate a little but of butt expansion. With that said, I think I would prefer more long-form, self contianed stories rather than multiple vignettes. I just hate waiting for the next part :). I plan to continue to purchase regardless as the quality is really quite good.
Thank you very much for your support and feedback. Is MG muscle growth? And WG weight gain? If so I admit I am not so much either but I have been trying to incorporate some other kinks outside my comfort zone to reach a broader audience but like you BE is my favorite and my main focus. And i will make sure that is the star of the show.
I was wondering if I might have "lost" a few readers by keeping three or four stories going in small chapter format. I will probably just do 2 this next time in a longer chunk.
I am glad you are enjoying it and I will work hard to not keep you waiting. I am working on a novel with an all new setting and characters too and it has slowed me down a little...but Ill get back on it.
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I also have an email address for questions, comments, reviews, etc...
[email protected]
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You got it - WG is weight gain and MG is muscle growth. I'm looking forward to whatever you write!
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^Thank you. That means a lot.^
Volume Five is in review and pending approval by Amazon and will be up soon.
Edit: waiting a little longer before I post a link as I just uploaded an edited version that fixed a lot of typos.
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Okay vol five is up now.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B076FMRZJ4/ref=mp_s_a_1_5?ie=UTF8&qid=1508009049&sr=8-5&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=51iaztqL8HL&ref=plSrch
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Vol 1 is going on sale for 6 days at a reduced price starting on the 19th.
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Also, I am working on a novel that is taking up a lot of time and creative juices. I will still continue to work and release The Cleavage Accounts but I want to make each installment be the very best possible and concentrate on the stories that people like the most.
How do you rank each story? Which ones do you want to see the next installment of the most between:
The Detour
The Condition
The Familiar
The Client
The Waitress
The Supermarket
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The two I am most interested in at the moment are The Supermarket and The Condition. The Familiar is a close third. I'm really enjoying the fairly unique setting and BE method in The Supermarket and can't wait to read more of it.
I like it when the growth is spaced out a bit more over time. The Detour is nice, but I feel like things went from HUGE to WOW fairly quickly and at that point I feel it's harder to maintain interest.
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Thanks for that. I agree, I like slow burn BE stories that take their time to build momentum. When it happens too fast I feel like the author paints themselves in a corner and there's no more excitement to be had in the journey. But then I felt I needed to write some fanservice type episodes so that's why I came up with The Client and The Waitress.
The Detour is almost anti BE because of all the angst the characters experience but I really hoped to develop them as characters and then throw in a surprise or two later on that would appeal to the slow burn fans.
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I am working on Volume 6 which will include the next chapters of The Supermarket and The Condition for sure. Maybe I can squeeze a The Familiar too...not sure yet.
V1 is now on sale for a short time.
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I am working on Volume 6 which will include the next chapters of The Supermarket and The Condition for sure. Maybe I can squeeze a The Familiar too...not sure yet.
V1 is now on sale for a short time.
Looking forward to it :) .
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Ok so Amazon is having some issues and volume six is hung up in server limbo. I decided just to do two long installments of The Supermarket and The Condition.
When it goes live I'll come back and post a link.
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Finally came up.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B076QJFTVD/ref=mp_s_a_1_5?ie=UTF8&qid=1508964410&sr=8-5&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=41M8eyWL6oL&ref=plSrch
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Okay. I am going to work hard to get 7 out sooner rather than later and have it include the next chapters of The Supermarket, The Condition and The Familiar as those seem to be the most popular stories.
Thank you all for the purchases and Kindle Unlimited reads.
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I enjoyed part 6 quite a bit! I'm looking forward to "big" things ahead in all three of the stories you mentioned for part 7.
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Thanks. I am going to try to introduce some more tension and drama for all of them as well as raise the stakes dramatically for at least one of them.
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Volume 7 is up.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B0776Z4N28/ref=mp_s_a_1_7?ie=UTF8&qid=1509982737&sr=8-7&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts&dpPl=1&dpID=516%2BPCtDelL&ref=plSrch
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Volume 8 is live.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B077J15S34/ref=sr_1_7?ie=UTF8&qid=1510848789&sr=8-7&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts
Volume 2 is on sale for a limited time.
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Got held up by the holiday, but number 9 is ready. I hope you all enjoy it.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B078C7NJD9/ref=mp_s_a_1_9?ie=UTF8&qid=1511955730&sr=8-9&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=the+cleavage+accounts
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i just uploaded an edited version that is now live that fixed a bunch of typos and reptitive words. Please refresh your device or request newest version. I apologize for the inconvenience.
I also made a new cover for book 5. It doesnt show on the live site yet but if you click "Look inside" you can see it and maybe refresh your device to see that.
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It seems you have to contact the kindle folks and ask them to push the new version to you. Nothing story wise changed but it is a better read due to the corrections I made and I added maybe a few lines.
Books 4 5 an 7 have new covers, although admittedly 7 is really the same just reimagined a bit, so if you dont like it now the new version of it won't change that. I may change a few more.
I added what I think is a working table of contents to Book 4 so if you want to try it out and see if it works, please let me know and I will implement it in future books. #10 is going to be a doozy. I'm going to end a number of stories and have the next xhapters of most of the others. Then I am going to possibly change the format and the way Ive been doing things altogether, not sure yet.
Thanks again for all the purchases. And for all your patience with my formatting and execution errors as this is all still new to me, but I am learning.
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Number 10 is live.
https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/B078HV82XT?ref_=dbs_s_def_awm_dirs_l_10&storeType=ebooks