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BillPratt
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« on: April 23, 2012, 02:31:21 AM »
Reworking an old story. Guy has a Genie lamp. In short order breasts and sexual appetites get significantly larger. A bit mind rapey as Ten would put it. Need people willing to read and comment on content and pacing. Any takers?

JH, I apologize, but the one liner about Sharon being turned into a blow-up doll died over pacing.
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BillPratt
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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2012, 02:34:32 AM »
Oh, and I might as well pimp this while I'm here.
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Adama
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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 03:48:34 AM »
Quote from: BillPratt on April 23, 2012, 02:34:32 AM
Oh, and I might as well pimp this while I'm here.
Nice, I'm impressed so far.

I'd be willing to be a test reader.
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pedonbio
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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2012, 06:09:01 AM »
Very impressive.  Grin
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JH_
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« Reply #4 on: April 23, 2012, 03:33:13 PM »
I don't think I have the time to be a beta reader right now, but I wish you luck with it. I'm sorry to hear that Sharon hit the cutting-room floor. Smiley
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