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Looking for test readers
« on: September 30, 2017, 08:31:15 PM »
70 page unillustrated comic. Reality alteration-based breast expansion, beautification and a bunch of other stuff.

Neil couldn't find the remote control until he looked in Neil's room and found one beside the stack of books on string theory and quantum mechanics. When he turned up the volume... uh... weird things happened.
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Re: Looking for test readers
« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2017, 12:02:01 AM »
Do I have to have a BEArchive login to read it?

(I'll email you.)

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Re: Looking for test readers
« Reply #2 on: October 01, 2017, 02:23:46 PM »
That's a good point. Send me an e-mail if interested. This is a bit much for private messages
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Re: Looking for test readers
« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2017, 11:14:18 PM »
I am interested. Sending you IM with email.

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« Reply #4 on: October 13, 2017, 10:53:35 PM »
Thanks folks. I'm assimilating the comments and now I'm moving on to something else. Im pitching this more Bimbo storyclub because the boobs grow, but they don't get totally out of hand and the story's pretty heavy on the mind control.

Rob orders a chemistry textbook, Components of Matter, online. A short time later he receives The Compendium of Mind and Matter, a magic text book. You can probably guess most of what follows.

Anyone interested in reading?
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Re: Looking for test readers
« Reply #5 on: October 15, 2017, 10:53:14 AM »
Would love to real it

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Re: Looking for test readers
« Reply #6 on: October 15, 2017, 04:25:04 PM »
E-mail sent to the address you registered at this forum.
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« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2017, 10:45:58 AM »
Ken clicked the wrong link while downloading a porn video from a file locker and got Master PC instead. Maybe his life will suck a little less now.

Not entirely sure how long this should be. I've just been having fun.

BE and mind control, mostly.

Any readers?
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« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2017, 06:16:14 PM »
Ken clicked the wrong link while downloading a porn video from a file locker and got Master PC instead. Maybe his life will suck a little less now.

Not entirely sure how long this should be. I've just been having fun.

BE and mind control, mostly.

Any readers?

sounds like a good read

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« Reply #9 on: November 23, 2017, 10:22:06 AM »
Ken clicked the wrong link while downloading a porn video from a file locker and got Master PC instead. Maybe his life will suck a little less now.

Not entirely sure how long this should be. I've just been having fun.

BE and mind control, mostly.

Any readers?

That sounds like it should be fun. I'll PM you my email address.

BTW, in your initial post to this thread would an "unillustrated comic" be what it the old days we would call a story? :)
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« Reply #10 on: November 25, 2017, 11:13:09 AM »
The unillustrated comic is just a script for a comic. Some folk got confused and wondered where the pictures were once, so I made sure that unillustrated came to the forefront. That time I accidentally left out script, though.

And this time I forgot to mention that the Master PC story's final destination is intended to also be a comic, so it doesn't read like prose.

What I'm trying to find out is, "Is this worth polishing up and sending to the BESC?" Is it fun? Would it look good with pictures?
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