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Request For Feedback
« on: June 16, 2002, 02:55:12 PM »
Lets see how well this works, shall we?

One week ago, I uploaded a story to the (prohibited O) (http://www.(prohibited O).com/download.php?StoryID=866). According to the stats on that site, it's been downloaded 940 times in that week, which is nice to know.

In that time, I have recieved zero pieces of reaction in any way, shape or form to the address for such I placed at the end. Fair enough, if I was doing this for the feedback, I'd have never have got to four whole stories :-)

But I'm working on another story, and so it would be quite nice to know what people thought of the last one.

Did anyone think *anything* of the last one? Or any of them?
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sebreid

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Re: Request For Feedback
« Reply #1 on: June 17, 2002, 05:41:48 AM »
will download tonite and give it a look over...

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rtpoe

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Re: Request For Feedback
« Reply #2 on: June 17, 2002, 08:06:52 PM »
Haven't had the chance to read it yet, but if it's anything like the other Simon stories, it'll be darn good...

rtpoe  
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The ground is deep with fallen leaves and nuts of White and Red Oak, and of Beech, that line and fill the footprints and the ruts which all along the wooded pathway reach. First claim, of course, to chipmunk and to squirrel for bleak mid-Winter sustenance belongs, as all around old leaves descend and twirl about, through feathered autumn songs.
"Oakwise", Nut Gathering at Alban Eve

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MrHHH

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Re: Request For Feedback
« Reply #3 on: June 21, 2002, 01:02:45 AM »
Short, yet interesting. It could be read as a stand-alone story.

Actually, I think it was too short. You put more work into describing the physical effects of her abilities, than you did of her enjoying her abilities.

And your downloads are up to 1060 now.  

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Catch

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Re: Request For Feedback
« Reply #4 on: June 21, 2002, 01:21:04 AM »
Sorry b3. Can't use zip files.

If it goes up anywhere else let me know.
If only...

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Re: Request For Feedback
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2002, 08:41:32 AM »
No zip? This we can solve...

(It's up at (prohibited L) also, btw)  
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MrHHH

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Re: Request For Feedback
« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2002, 07:55:27 PM »
Hi Catch. As owner/operator of (prohibited O), I'm curious. Why can't you use zips?