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BustArtist

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Please Rate My Newest Works
« on: June 16, 2002, 08:25:10 PM »
I've uploaded some more previews of my BE comic, "grOw" as well as a nearly 2 minute Flash movie of NaviGirl 4 for members, and have hardly heard a thing.

I know we are not all good at writing letters, or have the time.

SO...

I made 2 quick web polls that will allow for a simple 2-CLICK feedback:  click your rating, click send.  THAT'S IT!

Please do me a favor and rate these works for me, so that I know if I am "going in the right direction" or if anyone is even LOOKING at my updates.

The polls are available on the firts page of the "grOw" series, and at the bottom of the NaviGirl Movie page.

The polls are available on the first page of the "grOw" series, and at the bottom of the NaviGirl Movie page.

FREE:

grOw poll:
http://www.bearchive.com/~BAGallery/specials_grow1.html

MEMBERS:

Navigirl poll: http://members.bearchive.com/~BAGallery/specials_ng4_3.html

grOw poll:
http://members.bearchive.com/~BAGallery/specials_grow1.html


Thank you!!!!  


grOw/cOmics and grOw/stOries available at: www.bustartist.com

Previews at: DeviantArt Gallery

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Seelie

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Re: Please Rate My Newest Works
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2002, 08:48:22 PM »
I can only comment on the grow preview, but here goes.

From what you've shared it looks great. Plotwise it contains my most important requirement: the girl enjoys her growth (almost always included in such things, but still appreciated). I also like the idea of her knowingly cooperating and the latest previews show her getting up to a remarkably huge size, which I adore. I think overalls were a nice choice of clothing for the scene and from the previews it looks like you've taken good advantage of them.

The arts excellent, a lot more detail than I'm used to seeing. Seems on a par with anything professionally released. On my monitor the lettering looks a tad hard to read, but I think that's more my monitor than your work. Figured I'd just mention it incase anyone else has a similar situation. If not then ignore it.

Good luck with the project. And the Navigirl too.
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Hmm, I guess I'm not as omniscient as I thought.

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MrHHH

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Re: Please Rate My Newest Works
« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2002, 10:39:11 PM »
Well, I download the PDF.
The only thing that I thought could use improvement was the beginnning. Three pages to chase off a salesman?

Will you do visual sound effects?  

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v8ta

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Re: Please Rate My Newest Works
« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2002, 01:24:51 AM »
the trailer was fantastic - great production values, entertaining. not much in the way of BE, as I recall, but then again, it's a teaser and it works.

the previews of the comic look promising. I'm dying for it to be finished so I can see the real thing. you showed a real flair for storytelling the fantasy (not just showing growth) in the earlier genie comic and I see evidence of the same here.

looking forward to the works in progress,

-v8ta