Hi subcom,
Not a bad effort ! Some excellent facial movements and camera work ! Not to mention BE (HA !)
You make some (I think) very applicable comments in your post.
I know there are a few threads running right now about what makes good BE entertainment, but I wanted to thank you for "watch_her_grow.avi", so I included the coments here also.
Generally I like slow BE growth stories, and clothed (clothing involved). Like the girl wakes in the morning, larger, puts on her bra and finds that she is bulging out of it in all directions, and some 'reactions' from the girl experiencing the BE, favorable, surprised, disgusted. Although, I like almost any form of BE, fast, slow, clothed, nude, etc... The only ones that I really stop reading or lose interest in are, 'and then her boobs grew as big as a house, etc...'
For animations it is really difficult (at the present time) to do clothing, and slow growth BE. Clothing is almost impossible, and it takes character development for slow growth stories, meaning longer animations and more dialouge. Your comment about camera cuts is very appropriate. I should have used that technique in RDTP. I never got any comments, but the entire body (not only the boobs), and in particular the face, changed drastically in that animation (going from an innocent looking young girl to a womanly and buxom kung fu warrior). Better editing would have 'lengthened' the BE sequence, and highlighted the 'character' change. A longer animation would have presented the 'story' more fully.
So, I guess, like most things it kind of just comes down to a good presentation. I think BE only works if there is a story line or plot included, BE for the sake of BE just does not seem to work so well for me. Things like Ricky Java's Javarelle_Informercial work (for me) because, since it's presented as an infomercial, in that case, I am mentally already setup for a short sweet little BE scence (ie, the BE scene has been nicely encapsulated into a presentation, it is not just BE). Right now that may be the limit for animations for good BE, things like takes on, Jenny Craig, Weight Watchers, Bloussant, anything by Ronco commercials, etc... (please fill us animators with other ideas !).
Voluminous also put out a recent BE animation. Although the animation itself maybe a little lacking, it's got that (from Tennebrae) "mammophile dialouge". I got a kick out of it, because of the dialouge. Maybe again pointing out, that overall presentation is what really counts.
later,
StudioZ