BE IS in focus in this story, maybe not as much as TG/Shem... but that's one of the categories included in the story types here and on the (prohibited O) and some BE writers do those kind of stories from time to time... I've written a BE one once and will sometime again... but now I've done a TG one, and I'd say a good one at that... and I'd like feedback instead of people telling me I'm off topic