My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« on: November 26, 2001, 10:23:00 PM »
For those who might be interested in that kind of thing.  My first TG story has finally been posted on www.fictionmania.com

It's called Blow Up Doll and of course contains BE in it.

It's about a guy who gets turned into an inflatable rubber shemale living doll.  If anyone's interested, go see my story, run a search for my pen name BlowMuP and you should find my story, I'd really like to have some feedback as I haven't had it proofread


Re: My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« Reply #1 on: December 04, 2001, 08:02:00 AM »
I'd really be thankful if any of you could give me feedback on my first TG & BE story ever... I've had rave reviews as of now... you can find it on www.fictionmania.com  and it's called Blow Up Doll

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Re: My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« Reply #2 on: December 04, 2001, 10:28:00 AM »
Put it on the Obverflowing bra, cause that site ypou gave is very slow in doing anything.

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Re: My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« Reply #3 on: December 05, 2001, 01:26:00 AM »
Here's a link to the story.

Blow Up doll

I'd appreciate that you leave the TG stories off "The (prohibited O)" unless BE is a main focus.

Fictionmania seems to be a TG story archive, it seems to already have a home.

[ December 04, 2001: Message edited by: MrHHH ]


Re: My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« Reply #4 on: December 05, 2001, 01:35:00 AM »
BE IS in focus in this story, maybe not as much as TG/Shem... but that's one of the categories included in the story types here and on the (prohibited O) and some BE writers do those kind of stories from time to time... I've written a BE one once and will sometime again... but now I've done a TG one, and I'd say a good one at that... and I'd like feedback instead of people telling me I'm off topic

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Re: My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« Reply #5 on: December 04, 2001, 03:01:00 PM »
yes. Many of my stories can be classed like that. As i prefer to write stories that do include a fir amount of BE, but include other genres that i have an interest in.

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Re: My first TG story, want FEEDBACK!
« Reply #6 on: December 04, 2001, 03:02:00 PM »
Great story BTW