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Letter to Her Brother
« on: November 24, 2008, 01:03:33 PM »
Does anybody think this could, or should, be expanded into a bigger story?  My original plan was to feed it through the Babelfish translator a couple of times to introduce more Slavic or German or Russian grammar.  But it trashed the text to badly it looked like the writer was practically illiterate.  So much for that idea.  Anyway, is this story idea worth pursuing?  Anybody?

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Dear Yuri,

  Mama wrote to me that you have been awarded the Gauss Professorship at Göttingen.  I am so proud for you.  You always were the smart one while we were growing up.
  I know you and Mama have always worried about me because I've always been so skinny, not like Lana & Tasha.  Even little Eva got her womanly curves like the rest of the family.  Well I'm finally catching up a little.  (114cm so far)  I don't think I'll ever be as pretty as Svetlana or Natasha or Eva, but maybe, in a few years, I'll at least look like I belong to the family instead of looking like a young boy.
  While I've been in America, the men have been very nice.  American women mostly don't have bosoms worth noticing.  So here, by comparison, I don't look so bad.  And I've met someone very special.
  I was visiting New York City.  He's very handsome.  He reminds me of Papa when Mama first met him.  Mama said she was studying fluid dynamics and he was such a handsome professor, she studied extra hard to impress him.  My fellow is a little shy, but very nice.  And he very much admires my bosoms.  I have had a difficult time **83** ever since we met.  And thinking about him makes me want to grow curves for him.

  Yuri,  I love you, my brother.  Please give my best to the rest of the family.

                                       Deni

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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #1 on: November 29, 2008, 01:46:54 AM »
This looks like a "NO!"

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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2008, 12:51:47 PM »
Why, not? It looks promising for me.
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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #3 on: November 29, 2008, 03:19:54 PM »
I'm intrigued how it could be developed... would it solely be a collection of letters from her to him each talking about her new larger size each time?

And I don't wander by this bit too much so forgive me
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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2008, 02:27:08 PM »
It's nice to know there are at least three of us who'd like to see where this might go.

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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2008, 04:45:45 PM »
Well how would it progress?... no spoilers, just still curious
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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #6 on: December 23, 2008, 12:33:42 PM »
She has a brother who is an advanced mathematician, and she is a curvy woman who "wants to grow her curves" for the man in her life. Perhaps it can be a series of letters back and forth detailing how her brother utilized his mathematical skills to develop an equation to achieve her breast increase (sort of like a BE NUMB3RS)?
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Re: Letter to Her Brother
« Reply #7 on: December 26, 2008, 01:49:03 PM »
I never discourage writing; it sounds like a promising premise.
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Background and Potential Directions
« Reply #8 on: December 28, 2008, 06:10:35 AM »
This idea's been simmering for a while.  

She only met that guy in New York once.  And he was so overwhelmed with her he doesn't even realize the effect he's had.  No idea, yet, how she feels.  I don't know, yet, if they'll ever be able to get together again.  If they do, how?

Separately, what are her sisters like?  Even 'little' Eva.  How about her mother?  The other women where she grew up?

She's a mix of shy modesty and feminine vanity.  She thirsts for male admiration that's barely under control.  She's a mix of girlish innocence and an intense intellectual family background.  

As far back as her great-grandfather; his cousin, who had no children of his own, was an electrical engineer who came to America and built the first power plant at Niagra Falls, New York.

As Deni grew up, even with her father a university professor and her mother a civil engineer, the household had to grow some of their own food because the commercial distribution channels in Eastern Europe were still troubled, even many years after the collapse of Soviet Communism.  All the children in the household helped with the garden and livestock, as well as excelling in their academic studies.  

Her life-long familiarity with natural growth cultivation is part of her nature, and will, no doubt, shape her desire to make her family proud and to give her chosen man what she knows he wants.
 
  No spoilers here, just possible directions.  Further thoughts are cordially invited.  Anything from a question or comment to an entire chapter.  May your creative juices flow.

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Re: Background and Potential Directions
« Reply #9 on: February 03, 2009, 10:38:00 AM »
Deni's great-grandfather's cousin, Nikolai

http://ublib.buffalo.edu/libraries/projects/cases/niagara.htm

I'm still soliciting ideas.

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