Thinking of starting to write a story...
« on: January 24, 2025, 08:00:30 PM »
Hello, this part of the forum seems a bit dead, but maybe a quiet place isn't so bad for me. I'm thinking of writing a story after being inspired by some online (DA) artwork.

The art is about a young pretty-but-normal woman, no older than her early 20s, who's into fitness/running but decides to get implants. Then she gets progressively bigger implants until by the end she has expanders and looks to be over 2,000 cc, but is still into working out. Also, aside from her tits, she looks the same as before (i.e. no tattoos/piercings, no other work done). The art really checks a lot of boxes for me because it's a woman starting young with implants, doesn't go the full bimbo lifestyle, but still gets progressively bigger and bigger.

The art has titles but no captions, but I can just imagine a story where initially she just wants to fill out a little, but eventually she falls into the boobie greed trap. Then, she has to balance her running lifestyle with her obsession with getting bigger. She eventually has to make concessions to her running because of her tits, but she's still at least into fitness and working out.

The personal confession part from me is, I think I need an outlet for my breast expansion fetish. I don't know anyone in real life I can share my obsession with. Through some unforeseen health circumstances, I can't actually get out much. Online, I don't see a lot of breast-expansion-via-implants/expanders fiction that really satisfies me. It's pretty hard to find expansion-via-xl-implants talk that doesn't also delve into the bimbo lifestyle, which I'm just not into. I also don't have much experience as an artist, so I thought I'd try my hand at writing.

Anyway, I've already started writing it and hopefully I'll post it here. I've just always been a lurker here so I thought making some kind of announcement would kinda force me to finish.

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Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2025, 08:30:45 AM »
Well, will be looking forward to read/seeing it. :)

Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #2 on: March 29, 2025, 11:32:14 PM »
Okay, so writing is hard. I haven't forgotten about this story and am trying to work in it as a side project, but it is trickier than I thought. A lot of it is became I tend to be very deliberate, and things people pick up intuitively, I kind of have to consciously figure out.

The unexpected challenge for me is, when it comes to breast expansion fiction/erotica, I'm mainly used to (1) short-ish stories and (2) stories where the growth is fairly quick because of magic, chemicals, whatever. And I feel like the two are kinda related. Quick expansion leads to more stories that happen over the course of hours or days. I feel like that makes it easier to have shorter, more focused stories. Like a couple pages to less than 10 pages or so.

With expansion via breast implants, if ones wants something realistic, multiple surgeries have to happen over months/years, fills happen over weeks/months/years. That can still be done with short-ish stories, but then you have to have jumps in time or passages that cover a span of time. So then I get into... are there any parts of the story I should gloss over? How long should this story be? If I cover all of her surgeries equally, that means a lot of time in-between surgeries to at least account for. So many choices to make!

So then I start thinking about pacing. Like what part of the story happens as a scene and what happens as a description. e.g. if the main character/MC has a conversation with her plastic surgeon, when is it better to write out dialogue and when is it better to say "she went to the plastic surgeon and booked her surgery."

Anyway... writing is hard.

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Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #3 on: April 13, 2025, 08:16:34 AM »
^Any progress on this story?  ???

Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #4 on: October 18, 2025, 06:05:24 PM »
Sorry for the lack of updates! I haven't forgotten about the story and have continued plotting some things out, but I got distracted over the spring and summer with a music/video digitizing project. I'm just now getting back to wanting to write the story, but I'm finding that I have a lot of issues wordsmithing, particularly with steamy stuff. Yesterday I decided to try feeding my story into an erotic story AI and I'm surprised at how well it's working. It's kind of addicting to feed it chapter by chapter plots and have it write it out. I don't know how people hear feel about AI for writing, but now I want to finish the whole story. I'm editing a lot of the writing so it makes sense, but the AI is (for better or worse) doing a lot of the work.

If you're interested in what I have so far, I can share a link.

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Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #5 on: October 19, 2025, 12:02:12 AM »
Sorry for the lack of updates! I haven't forgotten about the story and have continued plotting some things out, but I got distracted over the spring and summer with a music/video digitizing project. I'm just now getting back to wanting to write the story, but I'm finding that I have a lot of issues wordsmithing, particularly with steamy stuff. Yesterday I decided to try feeding my story into an erotic story AI and I'm surprised at how well it's working. It's kind of addicting to feed it chapter by chapter plots and have it write it out. I don't know how people hear feel about AI for writing, but now I want to finish the whole story. I'm editing a lot of the writing so it makes sense, but the AI is (for better or worse) doing a lot of the work.

If you're interested in what I have so far, I can share a link.

Ok, thank you.  :)

Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #6 on: October 19, 2025, 03:00:35 AM »
Here's a link for what I have so far. Let me know if it doesn't work.

https://www.redquill.net/story/v90rcl-bellas-augmentation-and-awakening

I wonder if there are a couple too many characters and if the story starts to meander too much towards the end. I'm on chapter 28 (they're pretty short chapters, which seems to be the norm for smut, but still that's a lot) and Bella is still only at 300cc and hasn't gotten her second boob job. I'm finding that it's very easy for the AI to draw things out, so I think I need to be better at pacing and maybe re-focus the last few chapters. I'm not exactly sure how much I should re-do, if anything.

For a rough timeline:

Chapter 1: July before college
Chapter 14: first day at college (Septemberish)
Chapter 23: first day of 2nd quarter (January)

Edit: ahh I need to fix chapter 1 lol
« Last Edit: October 19, 2025, 04:08:50 AM by hofcretviston »

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Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #7 on: October 19, 2025, 07:54:41 AM »
Here's a link for what I have so far. Let me know if it doesn't work.

https://www.redquill.net/story/v90rcl-bellas-augmentation-and-awakening

I wonder if there are a couple too many characters and if the story starts to meander too much towards the end. I'm on chapter 28 (they're pretty short chapters, which seems to be the norm for smut, but still that's a lot) and Bella is still only at 300cc and hasn't gotten her second boob job. I'm finding that it's very easy for the AI to draw things out, so I think I need to be better at pacing and maybe re-focus the last few chapters. I'm not exactly sure how much I should re-do, if anything.

For a rough timeline:

Chapter 1: July before college
Chapter 14: first day at college (Septemberish)
Chapter 23: first day of 2nd quarter (January)

Edit: ahh I need to fix chapter 1 lol

I don't belong to any social online media, can't read it.  :P

Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #8 on: October 19, 2025, 09:30:43 PM »
Here's a link for what I have so far. Let me know if it doesn't work.

https://www.redquill.net/story/v90rcl-bellas-augmentation-and-awakening

I wonder if there are a couple too many characters and if the story starts to meander too much towards the end. I'm on chapter 28 (they're pretty short chapters, which seems to be the norm for smut, but still that's a lot) and Bella is still only at 300cc and hasn't gotten her second boob job. I'm finding that it's very easy for the AI to draw things out, so I think I need to be better at pacing and maybe re-focus the last few chapters. I'm not exactly sure how much I should re-do, if anything.

For a rough timeline:

Chapter 1: July before college
Chapter 14: first day at college (Septemberish)
Chapter 23: first day of 2nd quarter (January)

Edit: ahh I need to fix chapter 1 lol

I don't belong to any social online media, can't read it.  :P

The link doesn't work? I clicked on it from my phone (where I'm not logged in) and it worked for me.

Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #9 on: October 23, 2025, 02:09:22 AM »
I'm continuing to add to the story. Up to chapter 41 and our plucky heroine finally has her second set of implants. I've been trying to have the story be both medically accurate-ish and have the characters have reasonable motivations, despite it being a smut story of course. Particularly for the main character, Bella, I'm trying to make it believable that a somewhat reserved girl would want breast implants, succumb to rather extreme boobie greed, and of course have lots of sexual adventures.

The link is the same, and I can view it on my phone where I'm not logged into my account, so it should work:

https://www.redquill.net/story/v90rcl-bellas-augmentation-and-awakening

If you're interested, I can also just paste the chapters in this thread (or maybe it'd be better to start a new thread)

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Re: Thinking of starting to write a story...
« Reply #10 on: October 23, 2025, 07:44:56 AM »
^ It is up to you to add the story to this thread or another one.  :)