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feedback request
« on: April 26, 2002, 10:53:06 AM »
Sebbo now has my story 'The Keeper' on his site.  Please read it and give me some feedback.  I am not a confident writer and my ego needs to be stroked every once in a while.

Also, Sebbo has changed his format.  It is now easier to navigate.  At least go and check that out.  
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“HEY, HOLD UP!” Chaka said.  She turned to Jade, “Did you just say that there are monsters in the sewers?”

Jade looked up at her sempai and smiled, “I’m sorry, but as a Junior Waste Management Technician, I am not authorized to discuss this issue.”

For a long time, the whole group stared at the little girl in horror as she licked the spoon.
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Re: feedback request
« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2002, 11:41:55 AM »
Thanks a lot

From what i read so far, it looks like it is going to be very interesting. How many chapters were you thinking of for the whole story?
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Re: feedback request
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2002, 01:53:18 AM »
How many chapters?  I never thought of counting chapters.  I'm just writing as long as people are interested.  Or I run out of ideas.  Which ever comes first.  I don't even know I'm going to stop.  
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“HEY, HOLD UP!” Chaka said.  She turned to Jade, “Did you just say that there are monsters in the sewers?”

Jade looked up at her sempai and smiled, “I’m sorry, but as a Junior Waste Management Technician, I am not authorized to discuss this issue.”

For a long time, the whole group stared at the little girl in horror as she licked the spoon.
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