That example helps in more than one way...
I see you changed/added some lines to the original. Should I use the new lines, too? I especially like the sexier rump.

You also used color to show some other curves/valleys/etc. Nice touch.
Keeping in mind that it
will become lighter (my efforts to make it look 3D do that routinely), is the shade of brown I used OK? Yours has more of a yellow/orange tint to it. Do you also want more orange in the hair then I used?
Finally, neither of us has colored the "gear" (anything besides the tunic), yet. Any color preferences for those? If not, I'll use my own judgement.
The more I know now, the less I have to change later.
