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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2009, 08:36:08 AM »
I don't get the transition from 75 to 76
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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #2 on: January 17, 2009, 04:55:53 AM »
They're now inside the citidel and heading deep inside, the purple chap was what purple tiger guy was refering to when saying to be truthful and surpress the magic.

So say 10/20 mins has passed

Though where Erica's glasses went to I don't know
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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #3 on: January 17, 2009, 06:52:03 AM »
the purple chap is probably not the purple tiger from before, and where did the chains come from etc etc etc
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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #4 on: January 17, 2009, 09:28:21 AM »
She was handcuffed before wasn't she?, problem with metalic gauntlets, hard to tell
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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #5 on: January 17, 2009, 08:11:00 PM »
*waits for lightfoot to clarify*
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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #6 on: January 19, 2009, 05:50:40 AM »
Well, we'll see if it makes more sense after the next page.  Sometimes it's hard to make a page at a time adventure comic that doesn't leave things hanging.

The purple tiger guy is one of the people Coridan mentioned who would be able to sense things about her.  He is not related to Melkior who is in the body of a snow beast (maybe I should change the color of the tiger guy guard to make him less similar to Melkior).  Snow beasts can not talk, they are just wild animals.  Melkior can talk from the inside of any animal (like with the monkey).

The tiger guy is one of a non-human species not mentioned until now.  There will others like him, including her:
http://pulsetastic.deviantart.com/art/Zen-The-Seer-99007269
She originally was going to look like this:
http://pulsetastic.deviantart.com/art/Zen-4874972

Erica had the shackles around her hands on the last page as well.  This is a big wall that separates the (greek-like) empire from the neighboring areas.  I expected they would have some kind of checkpoint inside where people wanting to go through would have to be searched.  I thought about purification at one point as well, but decided against it.

Erica had to go alone with her shackles attached to that track so the seer could examine her.  The way it's set up, it would be impossible for her to be a danger to him.

Coridan had to dress as a guard to prevent himself from being identified (as he would certainly be wanted).  He had to take Melkior through another way (they would claim he's just an animal).  He has Erica's cloak, backpack, scarf, and glasses (which are inside her backpack).

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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #7 on: January 19, 2009, 05:30:27 PM »
The problems of reading it a page at a time....

I'm sure that it will all be clear when the story is complete.

At least he's not adding footnotes like some comics do ("*So-and-so obtained the Doomsday Sword in Issue 193").
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Re: The Stone of Adventure 01/15/09
« Reply #8 on: January 20, 2009, 07:12:01 AM »
Quote:

rtpoe said:
I'm sure that it will all be clear when the story is complete.




Well I can't promise THAT.  

Part of the problem is that this page really sort of needs the next page.  If this one hadn't been so detailed it's more possible I would have tried to do two in one week.  I'm going to see if I can have two ready this week (sort of for the same reason) but I'm not close enough in the second one to be certain if it'll make it.

I'm sure the infrequent updates for this comic aren't helping.  The last page was on New Years, and the one before that was in October.

I still think maybe I should change the color of the tiger guy.  Maybe make the males and the females the same color (make him the same color as Zen).