Have to agree with Vobe (
in comments on that page) on the whole hand thing. Try to strike that pose - left hand grasping at chest and right hand with thumb forward and index finger pressing outward to the right. Ouch! It can be done but it is very forced and unnatural. I would not have mentioned it had it 1) been such the focus of the piece and 2) just looked weird. One of those "it just looks off" type drawings. Love the hair.
A Fix without a redraw: Turn the drawing 90 degrees to the left and add the quote:
"Shuttle Commander I'm locked in the zero-G shower again." which will not only cause the viewer to scan more of the scene (away from the hand) but is a funny concept anyway.
Thanks for the invitation to add a comment
Lightfoot.
