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Lightfoot

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The Stone of Adventure, March 11, 2010
« on: March 11, 2010, 12:16:39 PM »
Updates for this week:
  • R Missing Materia Page 128 / Comic

Aside from it not being colored, I'm not totally happy with the page.  I had three different options to explain Aerith, and this page would have been different with each option.  It took me a while to decide on one.

I wanted more of a transition between this page and the last, but when I realized that I'd be lucky to finish one page this week, I thought an explanation was important.  Maybe I should have had page 127 the end of the 5th chapter and 128 the start of the 6th, cutting this long chapter in two.

...I regret not having a buffer of pages so that I'm not making the pages as a post them.