[Swog]

Hey all! A few weeks ago I started branching off from a part of the Hannah WP story that I just fell in love with and I thought it had so much potential.
The first one where I started writing it was from this page:
http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/604/604733.html
(only one other small story branches from the starting page and from then on it's completely linear, just pick the first option on that page and follow the only options you can from there.
Of course feel free hit back a couple of times to give yourselves some context!)

Here is the link for people who like to start from the lastest page and work their way backward so they don't get lost
http://www.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/990/990156.html?

So far it contains BE(duh), PE, TG, light TF, body swapping, hyper sensitivity, multi-breast, body control, instant orgasms and true love.

This is my first experience writing anything like this, or for that matter anything at all, and would love any feedback you guys could give me. I'd also love to hear your suggestions on where to take the story moving forward or ideas for interesting TFs!

[Adama]

This should probably have been posted on the Plume forum, where it's more likely to be seen by Addventure writers.

In case you weren't aware of it, here's your Author page.  It only gets updated at the start of each month, so it currently only shows January's episodes.

Personally I've liked reading your episodes, but then I'm a sucker for magical board/card games.   Keep it up.

[Swog]

Bah! That's where I thought I was! Guess I'll make a thread over there at the start of February so I can just link that page to make things easier.

I've been lurking the whole Addventure on and off for a few years now but I still don't have half a clue of how these things work behind the scenes.

I'm glad you like it though and thanks for the advice! Board and card games are my favorite too  .